Congratulations to Laurie, whose entry won this week’s Indies Unlimited Flash Fiction Challenge.
The voter-selected story is recognized with a special feature here today and wins a place in our 2014 Flash Fiction Anthology, which will be published as an e-book when this year’s challenges are completed.
Without further ado, here’s the winning story:
An Important Job
by Laurie Boris
After the first signal pinged from the strange planet, we had no choice but to act. We could not allow such a threat to exist in a peaceful universe. A race of beings, electronically powered but greatly enhanced by artificial substances, setting their sights on the domination of their entire solar system? Creatures with the technology for deadly weapons, but without the will or intelligence to control them? No. It could not stand.
So my team, following the signal backward, was sent to do recon. We learned their language, their habits, their weaknesses. Soon, we discovered their biggest weakness, and developed a plan to break their collective will. We started in the jungles, a surgical strike against the plants from which they derived the artificial stimulation that they’d come to worship as a god. Taking out the stockpiles proved more difficult, but our trained robots, cloaked in symbols the inhabitants found familiar and soothing, detected the scent and destroyed not just the stores but also the manufacturing facilities. The makers of the delivery systems were easily bribed into offering other substances: a simple switch.
The sickness that followed was a necessary evil, but we couldn’t have predicted how quickly the beings would turn on each other without regular doses of the stimulants. Within weeks, it was over. Those who survived were too weak to be dangerous.
My team, nicknamed Starbuck, returned home, mission accomplished.
I didn’t like being left behind, but someone had to keep the problem from brewing again.
Way to go, Laurie.
Thank you! This was fun to write, and such great stories this week! 😀
Congratulations Laurie.
Thank you, Kathryn!
Well done Laurie!
TD, thanks, and yours, too. So many great variations on this prompt.
A brilliant twist at the end, Laurie!
😀 Thank you, Mark!
The caffeine is vindicated 😀 Congratulations Laurie!
Thanks, AC…. It’s my recurring nightmare…that somehow THEY get our supply…
Um… perhaps I shouldn’t say this but apparently coffee production is down, can’t remember why. Maybe we should start stockpiling now.
Congrats on your win, Laurie! It is amazing how many different stories all come from the same prompt. Lots of creativity…
Thanks, Dick… I love seeing how everyone interprets the prompts.